give me your thoughts

The blue is only to make the shapes a bit clearer, I haven't thought about what colours I'll actually use yet

I'm planning on making a basic polo neck with a boxy fit, (relatively) long, skinny sleeves and a long placket. I want it to be really soft and fine, mostly white jersey, with some kind of basic pastel design on it. I drew up some sketches of what it could look like but before I decide, I want some opinions. Which shapes do you prefer? How would you alter them?

The Row AW14 illustration

Completed an illustration of two looks from The Row's AW14 collection and took a picture in the fading light today. They didn't come out too well so I had to play with the colours on Picmonkey to get some details to show up but I'm pretty happy with the one on the right

The collection offers so many perfectly tailored pieces for next season - they may be miles out of my reach due to sheer luxury but the minimalist look still provides plenty of inspiration

suited up

Was practising a new illustration technique this morning for my portfolio and came up with this.

Thought the blog was looking a little plain, so I scanned it in on my phone and uploaded it as a background. But it came out all funny with those big white blotches so here's the original as well... what do you think? I'm a complete amateur (as you can see) and all tips are welcome